The Pool
Friday, January 22, 2010
This is my longest poem yet. Tell me what you think bout it !!! :) basically this poem is from when im appealing to acjc to the present and then another flashback and back to the present.The Pool
Fell on the floor when I came in
This really big pool with familiar faces
Sleep too early, and I'm too fat
But I promise myself I'll stay to the end
But Now I'm commiserating with myself
It's just strangers amongst me
As those faces have already left
I can't wait for the day
No I can't wait for the day
Edward shouts and it's no show
Cause when he trains, he goes and goes
Water through his nose on an inside joke
And I'm so afraid, I haven't spoken
And he's so popular and he's so sure
But I know I'm more clever than a boy like him
Training is in bloom
Training is ending soon
It's alright but I feel so alone
But I will hold on to hose secrets in the pool
Maybe I'm a little over my head
But I feel so irritated by the things he say
And he's so 'funny' in his white trunks
The team was together and we all got hurt
I sneaked into his cracked memories
The smell of burning in the searing heat
Boy, he's really having fun
But it's all too crude to last
It's alright
And I try put myself in his shoes
And I will hold on to your secrets in the pool
Pity, or something ignited in my veins
And I pray it'll be a secret in the pool
My first time, hard to explain
Leadership camp on a sunny day
Rush of blood and a little pain
But it's more fun than I thought
But it may be a big mistake
Maybe you were all faster than me
We gave each other up so easily
These silly little wounds will never mend
I feel so far from where I've been
So I go and I will not be back here soon
I'm gone as the sun sets on the pool
I lied, kept my feelings to myself
In my heart was my true friends
Outside the pool
And you, you don't need to remember me
But what I give is yours to keep
In the pool
In the pool
In the pool
Cloud~Keep Floating On~
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